Open Poetry #12 |
Sonnet to a Caterpillar |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sonnet to a Caterpillar A glowing halo round a silver moon Is certainty a snowstorm’s on it’s way In Punxsutawny revelers assume A groundhog shows if winter’s here to stay The woolly caterpillar knows for sure If winter will be mild or snowy deep The black bear’s hibernation tells us more How far into the cave he falls asleep But radar screens and satellites now reign Archaic means of forecasting are done They said the blizzard of the century came But all we got that day was glaring sun When meteorologists must take it back It’s time to read the Farmer’s Almanac Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved this---down here in New Orleans I think meteorologists have a pretty tough job--lol---we learned long ago to just listen and say "uh huh", and you learn to watch for the signs. If it's late summer and those dratted crows get quiet--I buy emergency supplies!!! lol..and thank you for the charming sonnet. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Liz, Serenity said it ~ this is charming. Wisdom is found in observing nature, to be sure. A lovely, clever sonnet, Liz. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
how could you not read this? from the title to the end...just perfect |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is so true! For all their sophisticated equipment, the weathermen (or women) seldom seem to be able to predict what is going to happen on any given day. Those old signs in nature, are more accurate, I think. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I can't really relate to this.. Mostly because i live in minnesota and well it always snows! But I am sure it is the truth! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Yes,indeed tha time again. Beautifully expressed! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You made me smile here, Elizabeth. Very nicely written. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
All the old tried and true weather forecasters are called 'old wives tales' now. I know though, when the wind blows and the leaves on the trees are showing their 'belly' we're going to get rain. Love this poem Liz!!! |
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