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Paradise by The Sea |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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As I hold onto your shoulders You turn and face me Then we gaze ahead in wonder At the beauty of the sea The warm wind it envelopes me Just like your firm embrace Is there need for more words Or shall we cut to the chase? Your touch on my skin Makes me feel so alive A love such as this Is all I need to survive The moon it is full Across the water it streams As we merge together as one Under the light of the moonbeams As we lay on our backs And gaze up at the stars I can't help but wonder Is there a greater love than ours? Suetang |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful........ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, very beautiful  comforting, romantic...... SEA |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Beautifully nice. Red |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
I must say that you put it down today. i am a fan of anythingt at leaves us in lifesd hand....... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, this is a beautifully written piece, Suetang....great work! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . .to be by the ocean again. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Suetang, Wonderful thoughts. May your love last forever. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"As we lay on our backs and gaze up at the stars I can't help but wonder is there a greater love than ours?" ========================================= Most lovely!~  Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams ~Melissa P. Monette~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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