Lost In Love's Music---for PDV's Poetry Sings challenge(repost)

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Open Poetry #12

Lost In Love's Music---for PDV's Poetry Sings challenge(repost)

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-03-12 01:15 AM

Lost in the music that came with your kiss
Lost in the music to dance just like this
The melody sings of this new love we share
A sweetly sung refrain, playing softly on the air
Lost in the cadence your hand touching mine
Lost in the rhythm our bodies entwined
A harmony of touch, taste, sound and sight
Two voices sing sweetly all through loves night
Lost in the music your heartbeat so strong
Lost in our music to sing all life long

a kiss blown softly

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-03-12 03:57 AM

Very pretty and it flows smoothly carrying the reader in the emotion of it.....very nice indeed!!.....Musical too!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-03-13 09:02 AM

Hi Paula,

This is beautiful, challenge very well met,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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