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windwarrior_RJ
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 28
California

0 posted 2001-03-10 11:59 PM


Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of taste
to know
with the sense
of hearing
the flavors of you.

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of hearing
to know
with the sense
of smell
the wonderful
words you say.

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of smell
to know
with the sense
of sight
the scents of you.

Just for a night
I wish to have
no sense of sight
to know
with the sense
of taste
how beautiful
you are.

Just for my nights
I wish to have
the sense of touch
to show
how much
I want
to touch you
again
tomorrow night.

Just for your nights
I wish to have
all my senses
to tell you
how much
I love you.





© Copyright 2001 Rick Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

1 posted 2001-03-11 12:12 PM


A tender writing. Gentle love. Very nice.
Paula Finn
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missouri
2 posted 2001-03-11 12:16 PM


This is a gentle exploration of all that love touches...welcome to Passions
windwarrior_RJ
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 28
California
3 posted 2001-03-11 12:36 PM


Thank you for your kind welcome and your encouraging words.
RJ


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-03-11 08:24 AM


Welcome to Passions! I so enjoy greeting new members on their first post! Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Moon Dust
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5 posted 2001-03-11 09:33 AM


I like this, so beauiful.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2001-03-11 10:07 AM


Love you name! Welcome to the family. This is a lovely poem. I look forward to reading more from you.
KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2001-03-12 04:35 AM


another lovely lovely write RJ. I adore this one. You have got the muse on fire again!!!!!
wooooo hoooooo! C'mon and let us see some more of your stuff!
aloha nui loa,
Koko

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2001-03-12 05:43 AM


Welcome to Passions this is a very romantic and tender write to enter with ! take care ethome.

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
9 posted 2001-03-12 08:03 AM


Welcome to passions, and I truly enjoyed reading these gentle poem, a touch of love and care.

Charisma

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 280
Florida, USA
10 posted 2001-03-12 10:23 AM


This poem was pure magic! Exceptional writing RJ. Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
11 posted 2001-03-13 09:08 AM


Hi WindWarrior,

This is a wonderful first post and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



jellybeans
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Posts 2298

12 posted 2001-03-13 09:31 AM


very nice...I wrote one called 'take from me my senses please'...this reminds me of the same sentiments...but is softer and more caring...I like it lots...welcome
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