Open Poetry #12 |
Just One Night |
windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Just for a night I wish to have no sense of taste to know with the sense of hearing the flavors of you. Just for a night I wish to have no sense of hearing to know with the sense of smell the wonderful words you say. Just for a night I wish to have no sense of smell to know with the sense of sight the scents of you. Just for a night I wish to have no sense of sight to know with the sense of taste how beautiful you are. Just for my nights I wish to have the sense of touch to show how much I want to touch you again tomorrow night. Just for your nights I wish to have all my senses to tell you how much I love you. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
A tender writing. Gentle love. Very nice. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is a gentle exploration of all that love touches...welcome to Passions |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Thank you for your kind welcome and your encouraging words. RJ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I so enjoy greeting new members on their first post! Please, check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this, so beauiful. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Love you name! Welcome to the family. This is a lovely poem. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
another lovely lovely write RJ. I adore this one. You have got the muse on fire again!!!!! wooooo hoooooo! C'mon and let us see some more of your stuff! aloha nui loa, Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions this is a very romantic and tender write to enter with ! take care ethome. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and I truly enjoyed reading these gentle poem, a touch of love and care. Charisma |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
This poem was pure magic! Exceptional writing RJ. Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi WindWarrior, This is a wonderful first post and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice...I wrote one called 'take from me my senses please'...this reminds me of the same sentiments...but is softer and more caring...I like it lots...welcome |
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