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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-03-11 06:52 PM



Passion's Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Glowing
of moon is too
soon gone such full
shining face of pure grace
Return to light the hearts of
lovers meeting soon in this true
heartfelt passionate, poetic place
passion's moon return to waltz love
across the night moving ever slowly
music soft-strung across the stars
ever mindful of just where we are
and just where we will be going
waltzing gently through the
Milky Way - millions of
heartbeats away
Glowing


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-03-11 06:57 PM


Very beautiful images you've created! I like the format also.

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2001-03-11 07:08 PM


Beautiful, but I am partial to the moon..and it's passion huggzzzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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3 posted 2001-03-11 07:08 PM


Brilliant! I can only hope the skies heed your words!
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4 posted 2001-03-11 07:53 PM


You are blessed with a truly artistic soul.
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5 posted 2001-03-11 08:02 PM


Oh please, please believe that even before I opened this, I knew it would be glowing...!
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6 posted 2001-03-11 08:24 PM


sigh!
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7 posted 2001-03-11 08:26 PM


Ah Marge!.....so beautiful...such well chosen words......such a well chosen format... wonderful work of art!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Marge Tindal
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~ And ~
should this moon
refuse to rise, I would
summon it through your eyes
and see the reflection of your
love, come glowing back to me
to dwell within this heart for
all of time - for all to see
glowing evermore in the
softest surprise of
~ forever ~


Trillium~
Thank you. The long-timers know I'm a moon-a-holic !

Wynter~
Yes, I know.
So I hope to catch you in it's glow.

JLR~
Oh, they will !
She will rise again full of grace.

Joyce~
Well, I thank you.
I do have a tendency to let my words 'paint'.

Karilea~
I have no doubts, my dear.
Thank you, always.

Martie~
Ahhhhh ... to catch you in a sigh is pleasure enough for me.

ETHome~
Tee-Hee !
The words flow - then I try to make them 'glow'.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-03-11 08:56 PM


very nicely written Marge

Marge Tindal
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Oh, Rex~
Thank you ...
I could learn to like that VERY much !
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2001-03-11 09:49 PM


Oh my aren't you clever! I do believe we have a full moon, but it looked full last night too. I feel no passion - lol - I love the moon too but for its mysterious qualities, maybe I better change my thinking to yours, which was lovely by the way!
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12 posted 2001-03-11 10:58 PM


Marge~


This was Captivating...


Greeneyes~


***


"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-03-12 07:24 AM


Mysteria~
Ahhhhh ... the Passion's moon can be for lovers,
or for inspiring poets.
Her magnetic pull is mysterious for sure.

GreenEyes~
Glad to have captured you in her glow.
Thanks for strolling by.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2001-03-12 04:55 PM


I didn't care how many miles I still had to travel Friday night... I pulled over and watched the moon rise. *S* (It was that or run over the 18 wheelers that kept blocking my view! LOL) This is lovely, Marge... the moon pulls hearts as well as tides. *S*
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15 posted 2001-03-12 05:23 PM


The picture and the words create wonderful images and thoughts...James
Marge Tindal
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SuthernGal~
LOL @ you !
I can just see you caught up in a convoy -
trying to take a peek at the moon !
Thanks- hope you had a nice weekend with your birthday boy !

JamesMichael~
Thank you so much for the sweet reply.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2001-03-12 08:29 PM


WONDROUS THE MESSAGE OF MOONLIGHT

THANKS MARGE FOR TELLING THE STORY

WARRIOR

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18 posted 2001-03-12 08:53 PM


Pretty as a picture. Ya know I love those poems about the moon!
Hugs,
Deb

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19 posted 2001-03-12 08:59 PM


Marge, so pretty...... enjoyed this very much! SEA
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20 posted 2001-03-12 09:02 PM


Absolutley breathtaking and enchanting! I am a fanatic of the moon and stars...there is a special magic and serenity about them...and you have captured and painted that picturely so beautifully...thank you.

Smiles, always, Martha



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21 posted 2001-03-12 09:12 PM


Marge,

This is beautiful friend feeling it right know, wonderful.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2001-03-13 12:10 PM


MySweetSweet~Warrior~
Thank YOU for lighting my life.
I love you.

BloomingRose~
Thanks to you for sharing the beauty of the moon.

Martha~
I appreciate the smile and your kind words.

Cerenity~
Always like knowing that you share a thought with me.
Thank you for being you.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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23 posted 2001-03-13 10:57 AM


Another fine poem you've crafted up here Marge...wonderful write!

Nathan

Marge Tindal
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Nate, my friend~
Thank you so very, very much.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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