Open Poetry #12 |
Passion's Moon |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Passion's Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ Glowing of moon is too soon gone such full shining face of pure grace Return to light the hearts of lovers meeting soon in this true heartfelt passionate, poetic place passion's moon return to waltz love across the night moving ever slowly music soft-strung across the stars ever mindful of just where we are and just where we will be going waltzing gently through the Milky Way - millions of heartbeats away Glowing ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very beautiful images you've created! I like the format also. Betty Lou Hebert |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful, but I am partial to the moon..and it's passion huggzzzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Brilliant! I can only hope the skies heed your words! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You are blessed with a truly artistic soul. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh please, please believe that even before I opened this, I knew it would be glowing...! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sigh! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Marge!.....so beautiful...such well chosen words......such a well chosen format... wonderful work of art!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~ And ~ should this moon refuse to rise, I would summon it through your eyes and see the reflection of your love, come glowing back to me to dwell within this heart for all of time - for all to see glowing evermore in the softest surprise of ~ forever ~ Trillium~ Thank you. The long-timers know I'm a moon-a-holic ! Wynter~ Yes, I know. So I hope to catch you in it's glow. JLR~ Oh, they will ! She will rise again full of grace. Joyce~ Well, I thank you. I do have a tendency to let my words 'paint'. Karilea~ I have no doubts, my dear. Thank you, always. Martie~ Ahhhhh ... to catch you in a sigh is pleasure enough for me. ETHome~ Tee-Hee ! The words flow - then I try to make them 'glow'. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very nicely written Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Rex~ Thank you ... I could learn to like that VERY much ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my aren't you clever! I do believe we have a full moon, but it looked full last night too. I feel no passion - lol - I love the moon too but for its mysterious qualities, maybe I better change my thinking to yours, which was lovely by the way! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ This was Captivating... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Ahhhhh ... the Passion's moon can be for lovers, or for inspiring poets. Her magnetic pull is mysterious for sure. GreenEyes~ Glad to have captured you in her glow. Thanks for strolling by. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't care how many miles I still had to travel Friday night... I pulled over and watched the moon rise. *S* (It was that or run over the 18 wheelers that kept blocking my view! LOL) This is lovely, Marge... the moon pulls hearts as well as tides. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The picture and the words create wonderful images and thoughts...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ LOL @ you ! I can just see you caught up in a convoy - trying to take a peek at the moon ! Thanks- hope you had a nice weekend with your birthday boy ! JamesMichael~ Thank you so much for the sweet reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
WONDROUS THE MESSAGE OF MOONLIGHT THANKS MARGE FOR TELLING THE STORY WARRIOR |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Pretty as a picture. Ya know I love those poems about the moon! Hugs, Deb |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, so pretty...... enjoyed this very much! SEA |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Absolutley breathtaking and enchanting! I am a fanatic of the moon and stars...there is a special magic and serenity about them...and you have captured and painted that picturely so beautifully...thank you. Smiles, always, Martha |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Marge, This is beautiful friend feeling it right know, wonderful. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MySweetSweet~Warrior~ Thank YOU for lighting my life. I love you. BloomingRose~ Thanks to you for sharing the beauty of the moon. Martha~ I appreciate the smile and your kind words. Cerenity~ Always like knowing that you share a thought with me. Thank you for being you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another fine poem you've crafted up here Marge...wonderful write! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ Thank you so very, very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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