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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Inner Thoughts With butterflies that shelter me in warning, shielding pain to guard with wings that lightly tease, inside they come again. I drink of sweetened words of writ and taste to tempt desire. And as they flutter, rise in me a heat, a warming fire. Toasting me, deliciously on days of barely sun, a buttercup in yellow mist, I soak until I'm done. Relaxed upon the lettered field of cloud words on blue skies, released to fly from inner thoughts, I've seen behind closed eyes. Their freedom gives me mine in turn a stretch beyond the walls until the next dark clouds to form bring back those warning calls... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
'Toasting me, deliciously...'. I see many similarities. Appreciated much! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"taste to tempt" what great allieration!!!!!!, Maureen, this is great rhythm..... Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The rhythm in your wonderful piece was not forced one little bit, and made it so enjoyable to read. Wonderful poem and I sure enjoyed it. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a lovely poem that will take several readings. Joyce |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
J glad you enjoyed my friend  Kathleen thank you taste to tempt hmm a little reversal there huh? huggzz Mysteria It's a rhythm that sort of has become my style. Many times I have to write in free verse just to get away from it thank you. Joyce well I hope you enjoy it each time *s thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Maureen, Thanks for the great frame on my pic, you are a doll! I appreciate it...makes a difference....and I wanted to tell you this poem made me think of having butterflies in your stomach, you know that "in love" feeling wow! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 03-13-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen, thank you..for the kind words..and it was a pleasure framing your picture for you..I enjoy working on the computer..*s Maureen/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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