Open Poetry #12 |
This World |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well it's a crazy world for some romance with the statements of people with rights. Fanatic and calm seem to hold hands beneath the scary and mutually nice. Family ties and feelings are calling through the years and the seasons they blow. And I'm trying to write without stalling between the restless and the lifeless prose. You know the world is tragic turmoil gets into the verse. And all the king's horsemen can't fulfill their worth. And time has lost it's magic from a mouse to cyber I work... in this world I love ...it hurts. Well I want to make love in the twilight where the highways aren't blocked from the sun. And the time right now is just right on into the night we can run. When I fly my share will be waiting to take care to the people that hope cause my heart with a cause keeps falling dear God won't you throw me a rope. You know the world is tragic true words have lost their worth. And all the king's horsemen can't find a reason to work. And time keeps on searching for a technological nurse... in this world I love.....it hurts The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Ethome...what a write...the back and forth pull of fantasy and reality, weaving it into our daily thoughts...what a write. Thank you for this, Sir! |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
Well I want to make love in the twilight where the highways aren't blocked from the sun. And the time right now is just right on into the night we can run. When I fly my share will be waiting to take care to the people that hope cause my heart with a cause keeps falling dear God won't you throw me a rope. You know the world is tragic true words have lost their worth. And all the king's horsemen can't find a reason to work. And time keeps on searching for a technological nurse... in this world I love.....it hurts ======================= Hey baby they call it progress ... and they say that the changes are long past due. But for all the technological advances of man ... they cant invent nothing to replace the feeling of the moment .... when I first layed eyes on you jm WAY COOL write E-babes ... you have captured the sometimes slow to accept changes our world is throwing at us .. and ya know I love both the wisdom and cadence in this gift from your pen. "Fanatic and calm seem to hold hands beneath the scary and mutually nice. Family ties and feelings are calling through the years and the seasons they blow. And I'm trying to write without stalling between the restless and the lifeless prose." like I said...way cool me my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ok..lets try this again ... hey E-babes...that above reply is from me.. my sis was over here today using my computer and forgot to change the cookies back LOL We're living in a world full of illusion Everything is so unreal My mind is in a state of confusion But I can't deny the way I feel ~Depeche Mode~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethome: "Well I want to make love in the twilight where the highways aren't blocked from the sun. And the time right now is just right on into the night we can run. When I fly my share will be waiting to take care to the people that hope cause my heart with a cause keeps falling dear God won't you throw me a rope. You know the world is tragic true words have lost their worth. And all the king's horsemen can't find a reason to work. And time keeps on searching for a technological nurse... in this world I love.....it hurts" *** The rhythm, the way you say it, Eric..you are something else...don't know how to say it different..I want to hear you on my radio! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Karilea I appreciate your kind words. Thanks Janet for the comment and for the comment on the comment....you are way too cool too!!! Ya read it right kiddo......take care !! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Martie thanks for the musical oriented response...good to hear from you. You kind of snuck in there on me...he he......have a good day.... The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
these words are absolutely true! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...you are something else ya know that? Music in every line...you just sing to me sweet poet man |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ This could stick around and become a classic. Muchly enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Kathleen for your comment I always appreciate your words. Thanks Paula glad you could take the time to read and thnks for the comment. Marge I could only hope it would become a classic...thanks for such kind words! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yep love this, this world....well its not easy...and sometimes when God does throw us a rope, we can't find our arms to catch it...nice work |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Jellybeans for taking the time to read and comment...looking forward to reading more of yours ! |
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