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Name the Tune(poet devine's challenge)
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Name the Tune(poet devine's challenge) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hidden are my eyes, From the light of day, I close them to clear my mind, And think of you, But only when your not there, I wouldn't want to be without you, I want you close by me, For every miunte of the day, I want to be with you, For every moment in your life, Wouldn't want to miss anything. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Every moment...would be sublime. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hmm...I close my eyes and think of you..I know there's a song with that line...right now I'm stumped...but I'll put this in my library to see if anyone can figure it out. May we put this in our newsletter? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
poet de vine - yes you can put it in the newsletter. and thank you  JLR - thanks for reading Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I give up! I can't guess! Lovely poem, tough challenge! Debbie |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I haven't a clue!  Sorry. The poem was nice still. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Wow this is a beautiful poem. It makes me think of two songs. One is by Aerosmith off the Armegeddon soundtrack "don't want to miss a thing" and the other is by the Police "Every breath you take". I doubt either are right but hey I figured I should at least try. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Those are the two songs that I think of and with a team of friends we thought the same thing. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ok your both right its 'Don't want to miss a thing'. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Moon Dust - a very tender and warm writing. Thanks for sharing it. BC |
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