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walker
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0 posted 2001-03-11 04:27 PM



You are a feather in the wind.
You shed yourself,
from an unborn bird.
Now you wonder the world,
without regrets,
light, but heavy at times.
No one knows,
your true weight,
for to fly high,
or low can only be by choice.
You are a feather in the wind.
In a tempest,
you fly yourself free.
In solitute,
you set yourself free.
Rest,
is not a word you know.
In a pond,
you've dropped your tears,
the ones a feather can't hold.
You are a feather in the wind.
Your glory,
shines like the sun.
You are content,
you live in peace and
harmony.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 03-11-2001).]

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Aimster
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1 posted 2001-03-11 05:08 PM


walker--

this was beautiful...really enjoyed
this a lot. such a soft and peaceful
poem--brought a smile to my face.
thank you.

take care.
Amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-03-11 06:15 PM


A poem that touches my heart...thank you for this...
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-03-11 07:33 PM


what an original way to speak of a feather in the wind!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-03-11 07:47 PM


Walker~
How very lovely.
Seems like feathers-are-us !
I like it.
~*Marge*~


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Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
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5 posted 2001-03-11 08:01 PM


Oh for that balance......

Really nice job on this one!

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

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