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BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-10 11:16 PM

Bay Breeeze Memories
~*~
The gentle bay breeze rocks my hammock to and fro
as I savor the smell of salt in the air
the ocean surf laps softly in the sand
washing away all my cares
caressing time, remembering you
nothing can touch this moment of mine
I hear the little bumble bee buzzing nearby
my roses in waiting,
how they yearn to be tasted
a hummingbird hovers near to my ear
testing for sweet nectar in my tears
I weep not for sadness,
but with tears of gladness I relish these things
for the beauty of nature and love are entwined
to open the eyes of our heart and mind

BloomingRose

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-03-10 11:25 PM

A lovely, lovely poem. I am new to this forum but so far it is wonderful.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 2001-03-10 11:28 PM

A very beautiful and peaceful poem.....hugs to you!

Nathan

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

3 posted 2001-03-10 11:33 PM

The peaceful beauty in this was so serene. Calming. Really nice writing.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-03-10 11:48 PM

the ocean surf laps softly in the sand
washing away all my cares
caressing time, remembering you
nothing can touch this moment of mine
================
for the beauty of nature and love are entwined
to open the eyes of our heart and mind
===================

and now your beauty is showing

wonderful display of emotions and imagery interlaced.
beautiful writing Deb

We're living in a world full of illusion
Everything is so unreal
My mind is in a state of confusion
But I can't deny the way I feel
~Depeche Mode~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-03-11 02:13 PM

Very nice...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-03-11 02:55 PM

BloomingRose~
Oh .... how serenely lovely.
I like the way you presented the Bay Breezes ...
I felt I was there.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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