Open Poetry #12 |
Man in the Moon |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
sublime decadence imagination runs wild lunar night visions skinny-dipping in moonlight the man in the moon blushing Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful!! SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That's what he gets for peeking anyway!! Seriously, this was a wonderful piece from you and I much enjoyed as always. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece says alot....wonderful write! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What were you doing other than skinny dipping to get that old man in the moon to blush!! Loved it! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much... and am grinning at where it took my imagination! *G* |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Thanks to all of you! hehehe imaginations are wonderful gifts..Tis why writing is so fun and rewarding. The eye of the beholder is set on fire when the muse is at play I might have skinny -dipped when I was younger. Now I might scare somebody LOL My playful muse was just msing..hehehe and so were yours. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my love it....love it...and you know that I would love this tanka right. glad that I was able to caught this one my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Koko< I doubt that you would scare anyone, lovely woman. This made me smile at the thought of it,. I may have to find out what you are really up to or if it is just a poetic fantasy. It was very enjoyable to my imagination xxoo RJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like fun...James |
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