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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-03-03 02:17 AM



sublime decadence
imagination runs wild
lunar night visions
skinny-dipping in moonlight
the man in the moon blushing


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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SEA
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1 posted 2001-03-03 09:50 AM


this is wonderful!! SEA
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2001-03-03 10:05 AM


That's what he gets for peeking anyway!! Seriously, this was a wonderful piece from you and I much enjoyed as always.
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-03-03 10:59 AM


This piece says alot....wonderful write!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-03-03 11:00 AM


What were you doing other than skinny dipping to get that old man in the moon to blush!! Loved it!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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5 posted 2001-03-04 05:16 PM


I enjoyed this very much... and am grinning at where it took my imagination! *G*
KokoStewartKoomoa
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6 posted 2001-03-04 05:32 PM


Thanks to all of you!
hehehe imaginations are wonderful gifts..Tis why writing is so fun and rewarding.
The eye of the beholder is set on fire when the muse is at play


I might have skinny -dipped when I was younger. Now I might scare somebody LOL
My playful muse was just msing..hehehe

and so were yours.




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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7 posted 2001-03-09 05:14 PM


oh my love it....love it...and you know that I would love this tanka right.

glad that I was able to caught this one my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

windwarrior_RJ
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8 posted 2001-03-11 01:21 AM


Koko<
I doubt that you would scare anyone, lovely woman. This made me smile at the thought of it,. I may have to find out what you are really up to or if it is just a poetic fantasy.
It was very enjoyable to my imagination
xxoo
RJ

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-03-11 02:09 PM


Sounds like fun...James
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