Open Poetry #12 |
Still |
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
For every new tomorrow, For each new morning sun, For all the little battles fought, And each that we have won; For the years we've left behind us, And for those we've yet ahead, For every single smile we've shared, And every tear we've shed; Side by side we've managed, As each held the other's hand, And for whatever's yet to come, Together we will stand; A knowing twinkle in our eyes, And hair that's now streaked gray, Hearts and hands still joined as one, Together, come what may. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words Bonnie..nice to see you back again..HUGS ~V~ < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bonnie.... It really is good to see you again....and to read this beautiful tribute to true love!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
And she still writes beautiful poetry....I loved this one, Bonnie. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I recently did one with "Still" in it...can't help but think your's is better... hugs...so glad to have you home.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Perfect meter..and I mean that. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Sounds like you have a great relationship with your partner! A lovely poem. Cheers Jon |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie--Sounds like you have it made...this is a wonderful poem..would be great for an anniversary card...or any day. |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Thank you all for your kind replies, what a surprise to see this here today. Thanks again, means a lot. Bonnie |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I'm somewhat struggling now with an 'established' relationship...and this helped. Thank you. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is the way it should be, and you have written it wonderfully I'm so glad this came up again today! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Adding this one back into the library because I lost it during the move. Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you Betray him first, and the game's reversed... -from The Scarlet Pimpernel |
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