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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-03-10 06:05 PM


“THIS THAT YOU DO”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Your loving smile warms my every day,
and your gentle caresses
protect me during the night…

Your tender words reach my bare soul,
and your lips of softness
beckon mine…

Your moist kiss I’ve never known before,
and your radiant warmth reaches
my chilled heart…

Your innocence is special and intriguing,
and your many intimate passions
excite me…

My loving thoughts are under your spell,
and my being is no longer mine,
for I have presented it,
to you…
~~~~




© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-03-10 08:02 PM


Amazing isn't it, how someone can do this to us? Wonderful summation of that feeling.
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2 posted 2001-03-12 07:42 AM


This is lovely!! And when you give your all to someone special you know the meaning of the word 'love'.
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3 posted 2001-03-12 07:49 AM


The beauty of falling in love well described!

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

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4 posted 2001-03-12 09:11 AM


oh yes...you describes the feeling of love so well.....*sigh* ..loved reading it very much.

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-03-12 09:23 AM


A beautiful description of the power of love. It can be so very sweet. Your poem moved me Bill, it was lovely. Kate


Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-03-12 09:03 PM


catalinamoon - thanks for coming by. And yes, I find it most amazing that someone can do this to us.

Poet deVine - how true you say about giving all to someone and then knowing the true meaning of that magic word.

Just A Woman - And yes, by what you say, you are Just A Woman after all. And one with a warm heart, I presume.

Charisma - to feel love, I believe is to describe it. I'm glad that you liked it.

PrincessPout - thank you for your kind words. Love can be so very sweet, but I wonder at times why it changes from sweet to whatever?

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