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This That You Do
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This That You Do |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THIS THAT YOU DO” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Your loving smile warms my every day, and your gentle caresses protect me during the night… Your tender words reach my bare soul, and your lips of softness beckon mine… Your moist kiss I’ve never known before, and your radiant warmth reaches my chilled heart… Your innocence is special and intriguing, and your many intimate passions excite me… My loving thoughts are under your spell, and my being is no longer mine, for I have presented it, to you… ~~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Amazing isn't it, how someone can do this to us? Wonderful summation of that feeling. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely!! And when you give your all to someone special you know the meaning of the word 'love'.  |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
The beauty of falling in love well described! After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes...you describes the feeling of love so well.....*sigh* ..loved reading it very much. Charisma |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
A beautiful description of the power of love. It can be so very sweet. Your poem moved me Bill, it was lovely. Kate  Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - thanks for coming by. And yes, I find it most amazing that someone can do this to us. Poet deVine - how true you say about giving all to someone and then knowing the true meaning of that magic word. Just A Woman - And yes, by what you say, you are Just A Woman after all. And one with a warm heart, I presume. Charisma - to feel love, I believe is to describe it. I'm glad that you liked it. PrincessPout - thank you for your kind words. Love can be so very sweet, but I wonder at times why it changes from sweet to whatever? |
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