Open Poetry #12 |
Oh That Lighthouse |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“Oh That Lighthouse” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I was chasing you around the lighthouse, late last night, hoping that I would catch you, in the pale moonlight… There was some doubt, but if I did, I would carry you, as I knew of all the many things, that we would do… So I started running faster, and faster in the sand, shouting out, “One if by sea, or two if by land!” Well, when I said those words, you stopped in your tracks, fell into my arms and said, “I’m yours”, as I felt you relax… I picked you up, looked into your eyes and said, “Hi there”, then you looked at me and said, “BC, just take me anywhere!” I won’t say where we went, but it was high up in the tower, and I certainly got together, with my little lotus flower! So, if there is a moral of this poem, I don’t know it, because if you chase her around, the lighthouse at night, Eventually she’ll let you catch her, in the pale moonlight… hehehe!!! ~~~~ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You capture dreams and paint them beautifully. And you bring a gentle light of hope to each and every reader. "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I picked you up, looked into your eyes and said, “Hi there I remember that day silly wasn't I ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BC, I love this one!! Lighthouses are my favorite. I think they are a very romantic setting also. Very nice!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, Mr. Charles, you really got me with this one!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OMiGawsh... BCI... That was YOU???... I've been running circles around that lighthouse for YEARS, it seems... I really thought I saw somebody behind me....*shaking sand from my shoes here*... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The moral is: are you ready for this? Persistence in the pursuit of love will eventually take you to the top where love towers over all incoming storms of life. And that's my story and I'm sticking to it! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi everyone - I have been so durn busy that I haven't had a chance to get back to the kind replies to this writing. I do apologize, and pray that this calms down, just a little. BC |
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