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essenceofangels
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36


0 posted 2001-03-10 05:27 PM


My love for you is silent like a creature in the night longing for you!
My love for you is as strong and fierce, as a mighty
tiger!
You keep me amazed with each passing day like the
bright stars that shine at night!
I look at you like the mighty king of my kingdom and
im the humble servant at your feet!
But this love is unknown to you and only you. I guess you cant see it or your not looking hard enough!
Even if my love is unknown I will always look at you as the moon in a glitery stary night!



"Look back on life with kindly eyes"

"A word is dead When it is said,
Some say.I say it just Begins to live That day."

@--'---
essenceofange

© Copyright 2001 essenceofangels - All Rights Reserved
POETIC THUG
Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42
HOUSTON TEXAS BABY
1 posted 2001-03-10 06:07 PM


I liked your poem,some times you have to have an experiance simular to guit understand.I don't understand why i am the only one who replyed,I am getting woried about the sapport thats given around here.
essenceofangels
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36

2 posted 2001-03-10 07:00 PM


Thanks Thug I really apreciate your support!

"Look back on life with kindly eyes"


"A word is dead When it is said,
Some say.I say it just Begins to live That day."


@--'---
essenceofangels


[This message has been edited by essenceofangels (edited 03-10-2001).]

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2001-03-10 11:48 PM


essanceofangels,

Very nice thoughts here. Welcome to Passions!! I am looking forward to seeing more of you.

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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