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Celeste
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0 posted 2001-03-10 12:34 PM


Emerald eyes dance
in candlelight
as she sips wine, the lady
wishes to be wild
to captivate you in
a seduction like no other
beyond every edge you've ever touched
A deep promise echos
in her eyes as she gazes into yours
of what could be
if chosen by two
in this moment
while sipping wine
in candlelight

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-03-10 12:50 PM


wishes to be wild
to captivate you
==============
beyond every edge you've ever touched
A deep promise echos
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of what could be
if chosen by two
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oooh I love the subtle sensual feel of this
softly passionate with a poetic urging
very well done dreamkeeper!!


Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-03-10 12:53 PM


DreamKeeper~
Very nicely poured Vintage !
~*Marge*~


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Sven
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3 posted 2001-03-10 09:12 PM


no doubt. . . what year is this dreamkeeper?? and can I get some??

wonderful. . .

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Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-03-10 09:24 PM


oh, good...very, very good....
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