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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-03-10 09:45 AM


Salt’s Good Night
Virginia Salter

Spent energies
spent day
sailing vessels converge
navigate jetty
turn backs to the sun
lower sails
glide into marina
slip away for night
as salt spray weeps
departure
day’s end

© July 10, 2000
I so wish I could include the photo that goes with this of the sailboats converging at the shoreline as sunset deepens the hues of Puget Sound. I so hope you can 'see' them in your mind's eye.
© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 2001-03-10 11:21 AM

I can see, I can see! You've painted a breathtaking picture with your words, Virginia!
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-03-10 11:23 AM

Thank you, Denise! Thank you very much.
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