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This Morning's Sun Is For You
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This Morning's Sun Is For You |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
This Morning's Sun Is For You. As the shadow of the night dims And the sounds of the owls tire Wake up to the new day's dawn As the sun so bright entices a yawn Take the time to reflect on a new day Smile, breath in, listen to the birds sing Let the pillow fights go on, the kids at play Switch your mind into the new beginning Time is the essence of your freedom Catch the moment you now have, throw away any gloom Wrap yourself with nature's gift, the sun Let it warm you up with its awesome energy Encircling, enticing, and challenging your body Scream out loud, "thank you heaven, for the sun" Before dusk brings the darkness of the night Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Daniel I am so ready for the warmth of the sun on my face...this is lovely |
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FrankBH Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 10Florida |
Thanks for letting me wake up to these friendly reminders of a great day ahead. Really enjoyed this. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, the sun is a gift and so are friends, and so are you, my friend. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You knew I'd peek in  just to say thanks for this! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel, This speaks softly as whispers in the morning...beautiful writing..gentle and tender and a warm breeze~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Daniel the imagery and message in this is wonderfully conveyed well done poet sir ... nice to see your name here again as well take care jm Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I was feeling a little sad, but this picked me up. thanks for sharing  Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Awsome poem! Awesome message! ~*Patiently waiting for the sun to come up*~ Much Enjoyed Daniel  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Daniel, what a wonderful warm poem, and it makes me desire for some sun warmth on my face. love it. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ Wonderfully written. May the warmth of the sun caress you in gentle rays. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of a poem I wrote that I will post sometime soon...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wonderful advice, wonderful write! Nathan |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Frank, Kathleen, Sunshine, Butterflies, Janet, MoodDust, Irie, Charisma, Marge, James, and Nate, Sorry for the delay in replying, your comments are very much appreciated. Love you all. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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