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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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Garland, Tx

0 posted 2001-03-09 05:11 PM



You Are
By Richard

Sometimes we walk through life
Not seeing the beauty that surrounds us
Sometimes we stumble in darkness
Never seeing the light
Sometimes our heart does not feel
And experience the tenderness of love
Then that special person
With their special ways
Opens our heart
Opens our eyes
And we become for the first time
Truly alive.
You are that PERSON

© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-03-09 05:13 PM


very sweet and tender Richard...nice to see you here

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-03-09 05:15 PM


I am glad you have found that person. Very touching poem.
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-03-10 10:43 AM


Hi Maxec,

There's alot of wisdom packed in this beauty, enjoyed much,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2001-03-10 10:50 AM


Surely whomever this is for will be as blessed as you are by them. Beautifully said.
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2001-03-12 10:18 AM


max.....tender & beautiful.....helen
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