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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-09 04:49 PM


It's You I Seek

I touch the sky, reach out for you
and grasp a handful of memories, blue.
Each time I wake in the middle of night,
it's you I seek, to hold on tight.

I taste your lips on mine come dark,
remembering that day in the park.
The waters trickling, on natures' ground.
You picked me up, you kissed me sound.

You waded me through hardened times.
A storm that brewed, and then your rhymes
could always set my mind at ease.
As could the hand on cheek, to tease.

Could write a book of tales of real,
in suspended mystery of you, I feel
that many faces would then be seen
of me and you and inbetween.

You grace my thoughts, both night and day
In words, forsaken, I cannot say
how much I care, the words just pale.
I try my best, but sometimes fail.

By chance should you have thoughts like this.
when comes the dark, in full moon's bliss
remember lips that beg your kiss,
and always, how it's You, I miss.
~*~

Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2001-03-09 04:58 PM


Memories will probably get me through tonight! This is a lovely reverie, wynter! It even read in a kind of "soft focus" in my mind's eye! Beautiful.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-03-09 05:08 PM


thank you Serenity...sometimes I just wish to leave a thought for someone...and this is the only way I know how *s

I hope you have sweet dreams...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-03-10 10:39 PM


Yes, this is beautiful, and you have spoken thoughts I have had many a night.
Hope all is well.
Sandra

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