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Open Poetry #12

I was wrong

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-09 04:46 PM

Amusing,
I must have been to you.
Your desires,
broke me out of my shell.
Completely,
I surrendered.
Leaving myself,
at your mercy.
Silly picture,
I must have been,
feeding you,
my love forever.
You were selfish,
I was dumb.
In my innocence,
I thought,
that I would always
love you,
I was wrong.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-03-09 07:00 PM

Wow...very sad......I'm sorry it didn't work out..or maybe not...if it's for the best.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-03-09 07:24 PM

I'm thinking it's fantastic to be wrong in this case.....I've been this wrong before too....it hurts, but we learn.....excellent writing!

SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

3 posted 2001-03-09 07:32 PM

Ouch. That's a painful feeling. You have such an openness to your writing. I really enjoy that.

To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2001-03-09 07:36 PM

Hurtful, but like it tho.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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