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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Latin Beauty /2 souls in 1/u know hwo u r!! |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
LATIN BEAUTY JUST TO HAVE THE THOUGHT . . . WHAT IF I WAS TO KNOW YOU NOT REMEMBERING THE DAY THAT HOUR OF OUR FIRST ENCOUNTER YOU STAIRED BUT SPOKE NOT. YOU DID NOT SAY ANYTHING NOT A WORD. . . IT WAS NOT WHAT U SAID... BUT I HEARD... WHEN SHE HAD NOT SAID A WORD “LATIN BEAUTY”...HER NAME AND SHE WAS THAT... NO SHAME I WAS NEVER TO HEAR ANOTHER AFTER A WORD... “LATIN BEAUTY”..SHE SAID AT THAT PIONT I ALREADY NEW IT was “TRUE” "DEAD"... SO THEY SAID.. I FELT A SADNESS LEAVE MY SOUL U STOPED THE PAIN WITH YOUR “NAME” |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
sorry caps again got in a hurry.You know how it is when u feel like this. |
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POETIC THUG Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42HOUSTON TEXAS BABY |
sorry caps again got in a hurry.You know how it is when u feel like this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poetic Thug...if I may...as you say, "Caps" again... all of us encourage writing...that is why we are here...if I may offer a suggestion? Slow down a little...we're in no hurry here...that is exactly what all of these pages are for, to go back and reflect - unless of a nature that we cannot permit, your poems won't "disappear" as we have all types of readers who frequently dig through the back pages to find gems.... take a little time to review your work before you post, check for spelling, etc., and while some like the U and R abbreviation of posting, I can say from experience of reading others' comments here in Passions, that it generally distracts from the quality of the poem... now, please...write on! And yes...I like the premise of this piece a lot.... |
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