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SEA
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0 posted 2001-03-09 09:40 AM



Can't stop this heart
from remembering how it used to be
the times we shared
just you and me

Can't stop this heart
there's nothing I can do
I can't change the fact
that I love you

Can't stop this heart
from leaving a light on
refusing to believe
that you've really gone

Can't stop this heart
from wishing dreams came true
or for wanting
a little more time with you

~SEA~


If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-03-09 09:50 AM


Nor should you want it to....a lovely read...
JLR
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2 posted 2001-03-09 09:55 AM


I know the feeling and you said it so well. Even pain...you write beautifully.
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-03-09 10:29 AM


Can't stop this heart
from leaving a light on
refusing to believe
that you've really gone

Can't stop this heart
from wishing dreams came true
or for wanting
a little more time with you
========================

Ive said it before ...
some things never leave us... some things never should ...
this is so you sweet Sea-girlie ...
and THAT is a very good thing
your longing in this is lovely
in its sincerety laced rhyme
beautiful poem


Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2001-03-09 10:41 AM


sea..........isn't it funny how our hearts think on their own? helen
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-03-09 01:58 PM


Enjoyed reading this Sea...James
Jill
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6 posted 2001-03-09 02:07 PM


SEA - I love this....you penned this feeling perfectly.
SEA
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7 posted 2001-03-09 02:41 PM


Lady in White~ no, it doesn't really want to, even though I keep asking it to try.... thank you

JLR~ From your beautiful writing, I know you can relate....thank you

Janet~ you are the queen of heart ache and letting go.....I know you know.... no some things never should leave us....some things just can't...thank you so much

1slick Lady~yes, kind of wierd that it isn't something easily controlled...thank you

James~ thank you sweetie

Jill~ very nice of you to say, thank you

~SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2001-03-09 02:45 PM


Sea...we let go when theres no longer a need to hold on...this is so exquisitely written dear one...
Daniel J D
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9 posted 2001-03-10 01:09 AM


SEA,
Been away for a short while. So great to return to such poetic beauty. Love your work.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Aimster
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10 posted 2001-03-10 01:13 AM


sea-

this is so beautiful in its longing.
in the middle of reading this my
eyes welled up with tears but that is
a good thing...this touched my heart.
thank you.
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


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