Open Poetry #12 |
Cyberlove |
Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
Cyberlove I see so many people searching of late Surfing cyberspace to find them a mate Sadness and longing spurs on their quest Compassion and kindness, their only request There's so many players it's hard to tell All of them trying themselves to sell Saying the words, just playing the parts Lying and preying on twice-broken hearts Innocent victims, they are led by sweet hope Not understanding the full depth nor the scope Just faceless people with souls opened wide Bearing their feelings, not one do they hide Hoping that somehow true love will appear Whisk them away from all sadness and fear Capture the rainbow that follows the rain But sadly often they're left with more pain I'm so grateful darling, that our love is real The emotions we share, and closeness we feel Yet I still feel great sadness for all those alone Praying that one day true love finds their home Brian Beaudry |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I compliment you. You've captured this very well. It's dangerous, it's not quite real. I know that it has worked before, that it does work out for people sometimes and I'm truly happy for them, but it's dangerous...... You've described it well. To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done! I think you find lonely people, whether it's here on the Internet or in a singles bar or a singles club, searching for true love - putting themselve out there - opening up for hurt and pain - being used by the 'users'.....but even on the Internet, it can happen that you find true love. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
brian- this is a wonderful poem you have penned here. and a very true one at that...cyber love can hurt just as much as real love i think--if not more...cuz the letdown in the end can be im sure quite harsh! but as they say love can be found anywhere--even on the 'net. just gotta be really careful with who you are dealing with! take care. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Excellent poem, first off. Now I'd like to mention something about meeting people online. I don't think that having an online relationship is easy by any means, especially if there is distance involved. But I ~do~ strongly believe that it is the best way to meet people. Why? Simply because the first thing that you can know about someone here is their words and thoughts. Anywhere else, the first thing that you know about someone is their appearance. Pure thoughts, and pure love of thoughts and feelings. That makes the internet the best way to meet people, IMHO. Just something to think about. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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