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Open Poetry #12

Him again and again

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-08 05:37 PM

In darkness,
he crept in to my soul.
His sweat,
made me give it all.
His breath,
stole all my senses.
His weight,
captured my spirit.
His wind,
disrupted my heart.
Sweeping me,
back to him,
again and again.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2001-03-08 06:25 PM

Walker--You have described well how one person can become so important to another...I think the start of love is often like this. Well done!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-03-15 06:00 PM

oh yeah. I do know this feeling--while reading I was struck how this could also be taken spiritually...I enjoyed. Thank you.

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