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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-01-15 01:20 AM

gently she stirs
in the quiet of his voice,
          nearly a whisper

her hair undressed
and pillow-tousled,
she smiles
at the surprise of him

he speaks again
and she reaches out
to touch his lips as they move

but all she hears
          is his voice...

the words mean something
but she cant know what
     just now

for it is his voice
that stirs her heart

this morn...

-dgvarner
   1-15-01< !signature-->

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..."  cat stevens

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-16-2001).]

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-01-15 01:23 AM

I like. Beatiful write. Very nicely penned...

Poeminister

"It is our business to go as we are impelled."
~ D.H. Lawrence

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-15 01:27 AM

I have become mesmerized by your style, dg...
it is so clean, so smooth, and so graceful!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-01-15 09:49 AM

he speaks again
and she reaches out
to touch his lips as they move

but all she hears
          is his voice...

the words mean something
but she cant know what
     just now

for it is his voice
that stirs her heart

this morn...
======================

written like a softly whispered dream ...
very very nice DG
jm

baby can I hold you tonite ...
maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ...
you'd be mine.
baby can I hold you tonite.
~tracy chapman~

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2001-01-15 11:19 AM

POEMINISTER..hey thanks! glad you stopped in

SUNNY..aw shucks..*dg kicks her toe in the dirt and blushes..*

thanks a bunch! (hey i enjoyed your art on your webpage!! very cool :

JM..thank you much! ...hmm..it WAS a bit of a softly whispered dream.... *sigh*..

btw..i love your tracy quote! i've got her on my..uh..shh..OTHER identity..lol

hugs, g

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2001-01-15 11:47 AM

Wonderful write. Whispers can be very pleasant when accompanied with the right voice and words. Love this style of write from you.

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

6 posted 2001-01-15 11:51 AM

Gee this is such a wonderful write. i love the feelings it left me with. Great writing my friend.
Love and light,
Richard

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2001-01-15 02:18 PM

This is so soft, like a delicate kiss to a dream. I like the way you whisper your kisses.

Parker

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2001-01-15 08:36 PM

'gently she stirs
in the quiet of his voice,
          nearly a whisper'

Great title for a great poem!  I love this!  So quiet and passionate!

sp

I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Pixydust
Junior Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 36

9 posted 2001-01-15 11:50 PM

aaahhhh!!!!!!!!
ok...enough of that! Really, i loved this. Wonder who it was about

giggle giggle. You put your thoughts into words so well.
Great work!

Pixydust

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

10 posted 2001-01-16 12:30 PM

A precisely written piece, D....brilliant work!

Nathan

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

11 posted 2001-01-16 12:45 PM

You've done it again, Gale. I'm mesmerized by the way you can put so much into so few words!

Must be a pretty nice voice, eh?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

12 posted 2001-01-16 12:55 PM

I'm with everyone else, I love it.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2001-01-16 12:55 PM

DG~
I likey, likey, likey !

'her hair undressed
and pillow tousled'

Yep ... likey much !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2001-01-16 02:03 AM

COWBOY MARK..thank you much..always good to hear from a cowboy

thanks RICHARD..glad i could leave you with a great feeling

PARKER..whispered kisses ..just for you love...

SNOWPANTS..so glad you loved it..!

aw PIXY..what do you mean "enough of that"..we're only getting warmed up!

thanks for reading

NATE DOGG..thanks a bunch friend!

MAR..that voice..that darned voice! lol thanks for your sweet reply

EAGLE..thanks friend poet..

thanks so much MARGE! glad you likey so muchy

hugs, g

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
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15 posted 2001-01-17 12:24 PM

I'm going to hold you to that promise.

Parker

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

16 posted 2001-01-17 01:07 PM

Wonderful write!

I'm mesmerized by your poem

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

17 posted 2001-01-17 01:30 PM

This is truly beautiful...a perfect dream

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

18 posted 2001-01-17 04:23 PM

PARKER..just hold me baby..i dont make promises...

thanks INSECT..glad you enjoyed

PAULA..dreams are good ..

hugs, g

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

19 posted 2001-01-17 04:26 PM

WOW!

Parker
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20 posted 2001-01-17 04:59 PM

So your saying your looking for a meaningful weekend whispering session.

Parker

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

21 posted 2001-01-17 05:17 PM

hey DOREEN! thanks for the 'WOW'!

oh no LOVE PUPPY...

more than that..when its time for promises..i'll let my guard down..would you like to discuss this over a nice star gazing session........??

hugs, g

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

22 posted 2001-01-17 06:06 PM

Geeez, I feel like I'm intruding on you and Parker

lol (too cute)....along with everyone else, I love this

-SEA

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

23 posted 2001-01-17 08:13 PM

Such a soft, sweet piece

May whispers be mixed with sighs of love for you...

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

24 posted 2001-01-17 08:35 PM

SEA...lol @ you! cant very well intrude on a public blue page..lol
thanks for reading SEA..

good to be read..and laughed over..teehee

thanks MELISSA

thats so sweet

hugs,g

Angel
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since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

25 posted 2001-01-17 10:00 PM

This piece was very sweet. I enjoyed it a lot.

~Susie

Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are calle

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

26 posted 2001-01-17 11:02 PM

thanks SUSIE

i'm glad you enjoyed..

hey, i'd like to read the rest of your signature quote..it got cut off..

Martie

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California

27 posted 2001-01-17 11:15 PM

Very tender and love-filled...enjoyed!

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

28 posted 2001-01-18 08:36 AM

Very nice. Soft and sensual, elegant. Enjoyed the read much

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

29 posted 2001-01-18 07:57 PM

MARTIE & DRAGONPOE.. thanks for your kind replies

and for taking the time to read! glad you enjoyed

hugs, g

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

30 posted 2001-01-18 08:00 PM

Very enjoyable..thank you!

dgvarner
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Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

31 posted 2001-01-18 08:05 PM

thanks SUNSHINE

glad you enjoyed!

hugs, g

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