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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-08 12:17 PM

Uncloud My Mind

As visions flow, in soft of trace
Mine dreams held love of thine.
With each night shared, we two embrace,
No words, just touch of sign.

To tenderly caress what's meant,
No need for else but sighs.
For just one look from smile that spent
The night placed in mine eyes

Shall gather me into thine arms
And tranquil, we shall be.
My promises in full, to charm,
When comes reality.

Uncloud my mind, from disarray
Allow the paths collide, this day.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

1 posted 2001-03-08 01:25 PM

Just a quiet ~sigh~

To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-08 01:25 PM

What a soft song of hope, Wynter...a tribute, indeed, to strength!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-03-08 01:27 PM

'Uncloud my mind from disarray,
Allow the paths collide, this day'.

So love and identify with these lines.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-03-08 09:44 PM

Wynter - you will find the peace that belongs to you. And your writing is suberb, as always.

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-03-09 07:25 AM

dreamkeeper
I do that a lot (and sometimes even hyperventilate) huggss & thanks

Sunshine
darn if that strength doesn't come and go/
swings alot

J
I am glad you liked. I actually borrowed the paths collide from Professor Glooms title. I liked it very much.

Bill
and always I thank you with a

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-03-09 02:41 PM

Sometimes a breeze is needed to get the cobwebs cleared out... or you might not notice paths colliding. *S* I like this one very much... well done!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-03-12 11:56 PM

suthern

and sometimes when those clouds roll in I welcome them...I don't even know why.
thank you for your visit *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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