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Passions of Youth
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Passions of Youth |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Passions of Youth Virginia Salter river shore sand, grasses delicious kisses vibrant caresses teen libido indecent proposal shaky, timid request more caresses more verdant request sand gravel grasses, bugs innocence, fear liar’s promise ensues leave me be next time next time I’ll show my love next time let’s go now next time. . . home safe canceled date. . . canceled relationship good choice fear gone © July 7, 2000 |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Thank God I lived through it without too many mishaps. I don't ever want to relive my youth. |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
The trials and tribulations of youthful love described so well in this charming piece! The short verse length (like stop and go) added a sense of youthful indecision which played beautifully with this theme...all the while keeping the tone light and upbeat. Very appealing combinations! Jellybean King |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It makes me think of the movie Splendor in the Grass. Beautifully done! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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