Open Poetry #12 |
Dying Love |
Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Once where there was love so deep Now lays only pieces of yesterday Memories of better times replaced by bitter thoughts Love dies and the void becomes filled with pain Two lovers no longer growing by faith So much was shared and learned Each becoming the other as we traded our souls Only to forget in the end that secure feeling As we each went our own way searching Seeking something that wasn’t there Even so deep a love can drown Too many times, under a baptism of tears No attention is paid to that which we need While looking in vain for that which we don’t Pleasures of flesh replacing needs of the soul All too late we realize the mistakes that we made As we lie alone and sad, crying to ourselves Wondering, in the dark, where we went wrong Knowing that “forever and ever” is over Even though we have the rest of our lives to live Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Some good solid basic thoughts here, Rodney, now give me the details, I mean be more specific.....what and why and who happened. Enjoyed. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
"A baptism of tears" You have captured so much in this writing. This touched me deeply. Thank you for writing it. To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Well Kathleen, the who is my estranged wife...the what is our decision to split up...and the why is because, although I still love her, I fear that we have hurt each other so much, so many times that it may be irrepairable...and thanks for the comments all. Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
thank you vandana Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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