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Open Poetry #12

My 600th post! Revelation

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-01-14 11:47 PM

Revelation

I used to be a nail . . .

now,

- - - - - - - - - - - ->

I’m forgiven!

© September 10, 2000

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-01-15 12:23 PM

Interesting thoughts ... I suppose in all honesty I would rather be the nail asking forgivness, than the hand on the hammer.
The more I think about this poem, the more it makes me think
I like it ... nicely done

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-01-15 12:30 PM

VAS--I like this too...A Thought-stimulating peice...Congrats on 600th!!

Poeminister

"It is our business to go as we are impelled."
~ D.H. Lawrence

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

3 posted 2001-01-15 01:08 AM

I must admit, I had to read this twice to see it...and Now, I love it...simply wonderful, VAS.. Hugs ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2001-01-15 01:33 AM

Congratulations VAS, and this one was an eye-opener, and yes......that is good!!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2001-01-15 02:59 AM

very creative and thought provoking...thanks for posting

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2001-01-15 03:51 AM

Interesting and creative piece...well done on 600
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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