Open Poetry #12 |
senyru 102 |
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
with startled voices the seagulls cry me awake from this dream of you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well done Beki, Nobody does Senyru like you do senyru! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kethry's right.. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks, I appreciate the compliment |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this. Lovely Senryu. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow! I wish i could do this! It has so much impact in so few words. Brilliant stuff Beki, I hope you're chuffed with yourself! I know i would be ~Becky~ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
never heard the word "chuffed" but I am pleased with it. thanks for reading, all |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Those sea gulls can be so intrusive...yet on the wing or at quiet rest they a marvelous creatures. It touches me so when I seem them in a coastal sky or when I splash them into a painting or drawing. I'm guilty of feeding them at river parks, too. Enjoyed your poem and the voyage on which it took me. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
liked it too...such a heart-warming image |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
again, thanks VAS and Kaile |
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