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Chechen Kid's Hysteria
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Chechen Kid's Hysteria |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Chechen Kid's Hysteria Lancelot {Bilal} © Jan/2001 I saw a young kid on TV Face scratched like old Chevy His parents were killed And siblings horror filled Had a bruised body Surroundings were gowdy Russian soldiers got inside Pushed his grandma to one side Killed all the elders in a sec Destroyed lives without a check Child saw his people die Hysterical and made him cry He saw end of an era His life now a new para Don't be surprised to see This child grow up to be Hard, tough, rebellious, fierce Cuz none made his enemy pierce People with blood on hands Killing just for several grands For this child a big blow He saw lotso blood flow Doesn't know where to go Doesn't know friends or foe All faces seem similar Can't tell which one a killer! O! Allah help the innocent Cuz You're Omnipotent. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears coming down my cheeks) Oh Bilal, that is awful! It just saddens me to see how cruel and selfish people can be nowadays, and leave a needed heart in peril. (sniff) I pray that a change follows in the future for society to care for these poor people. This was so very powerful! Thank you for sharing, my soulbrother! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx a million soulbrother, for responding. This cycle is going on not just in Chechniya but also in Kahmir, Kosovo, Algeria, Bosnia, Palestine....and on. I can only pray and wish for betterment. Bilal |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ahh yes, Bilal...this is very powerful and the words just flowed so well....and the imagery was very good....you has used a couple of words flawlessly in the last stanza...this is just a great piece bilal....well done!!! Nathan |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thank you Nat Dog for responding to my poem and liking my poem. Bilal |
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