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Open Poetry #12
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Mote
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since 2000-05-24
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0 posted 2001-03-07 07:13 PM

Sea


Sweet sea of dreamings
ecstacy on sandy shore
amazing aura
© Copyright 2001 Mote - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-03-07 07:22 PM

Well done!!
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-03-07 09:04 PM

Excellent

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Mote
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
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3 posted 2001-03-07 09:06 PM

Thank you Lone Wolf and Poeminister
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
4 posted 2001-03-07 09:12 PM

OH, you've captured the feel of the sea shore on a good weather day!
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2001-03-08 01:06 AM

Hi Mote,

Beautifully done and welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)
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