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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-03-07 05:36 PM


Stones On the Ground
Virginia Salter

Hopscotch, hopscotch,
stones on the ground.

Pigtails, ponytails,
eyes of brown.

ABC’s, 1-2-3’s
music’s rhythms fly.

We play
at being children
my friend and I.

Down the road
someone has a plan

To take away
our innocence
with the back of a hand.

Down another road
someone’s feeling sore
planning dastardly deeds
behind the schoolroom door.

We wanna hang
by our knees and swing.

We wanna laugh and play
hear the school bell ring.

We wanna make Valentines
an’ give a little pinch
when green is not sported
on nary an inch.

We wanna be little,
and we wanna grow big
not fall prey to someone
who doesn’t give a fig.

© March 7, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-03-07 07:44 PM


Too many children have their innocence taken away. Very sad. You've expressed it well, Virginia.
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-03-08 08:21 AM


Virginia love, this is truly first class writing from you, absolutely excellent work. You have portrayed this very difficult subject with a degree of clarity that I really know I could never do.
So back up to the top you go love
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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3 posted 2001-03-08 11:02 AM


Your last verse is a right that should be granted every child... and the sadness is overwhelming that such is not the case... Well done!
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