Open Poetry #12 |
Walls |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Walls inside this womans heart is tender but for now, it can not surrender around it built with brick and stone within my choosing to be alone I know why I feel the way I feel need the time to help me heal I dont mean to push you away the wall will fall again one day but for now forgive me, please can not give my heart with ease don't want you to be my crutch and yes, I do miss a lovers touch but a heart and mind can be confused after a time of being bruised for what I need now is time so I will know, what my heart feels, is mine [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very nice write. waiting. keep in touch. Bernie Bernie Slicker (aka also: justsomeofme) [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . it does take time. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I hope this is true, I believe we can shut ourselves off during a loss....this made a lot of sense to me, Helen. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hmmm...walls are nice for awhile, but mine are beginning to close in on me here. It's going to take time. Related to this one very well. |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Well put. I almost cried reading this one. I know these feeling all too well! I love it. Beautiful! Thank you for a wonderful write. Hug's Tammy |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you all..........helen |
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