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Souls Aflame
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Souls Aflame |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Temptation Seduction Possession Passion Desire, then- surrender wrapped within captured embrace Unrelenting and forbidden-- burning fever pray release shiver aware this haze of dream lazily meandering wandering drift through clouded magic beauty within seen, but by the spirit eye-- cannot believe that this is I-- heart on tap-- pouring pages from my soul-- poke and prod-- arousing spark stirring ash souls aflame. *reworked and reposted from Open #7) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it reworked my heart o yuh nice one gave me a happier heart for now |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
ah, embers burning.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Aflame with passion...wonderful write, Serenity. Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Serenity, Went back to Archives to read the first one. Applause, well done on the re-write.. Like them both though.  Bernie Bernie Slicker (aka also: justsomeofme) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, "Lazily meandering wandering drift through clouded magic beauty within seen, but by the spirit eye-- cannot believe that this is I--" Awesome poetry here, and these lines really are remarkable, clicking into my library, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
Agrees with all comments above,awsome, passionate poem Serenity!! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh wow!  That's fantastic! Emotion, emotion, and more emotion!!!!!!!"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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