Open Poetry #12 |
Always, Forever and Then Some |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Always, Forever and Then Some My eyes look into yours so deep into your soul I find my existence Lost in passion discovering desire My appetite longing only you ALWAYS My heart beats strong as thy breath quickens emotion brought forth so long forgotten reborn again from your touch Only you FOREVER I give to you willingly without hesitation the total being I am As we explore life discovering laughter uncovering sensations only you and Then Some My devotion unyielding with warmth and passion Whispering into your ear, When the stars burn out and new life begins I will be there waiting For I Love You Always, Forever and Then Some. Kathy Harmon © March 6, 2001 -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you.... such a lovely verse of promise...devotion and passion. wonderful to see you so full of anticipation and to see your name and smile here today well done poetess kat take care jm Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
OHHHH How wonderful! I truly enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thanks Janet..your replies always brighten my day.... Oh, btw Love is well and alive here in Nova Scotia :-) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful writing, kitkat!! I love the end. Perfect! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'My eyes look into yours so deep into your soul I find my existence Lost in passion discovering desire' Beautiful poem, kitkat!! It's wonderful that you've found true love!! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Wonderfully passionate! My compliments. The first stanza is beautiful. "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, Kat, what a beautiful thing love can be. Sandra |
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