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| Open Poetry #12 |
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A Poem of Love |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
A Poem Of Love In the begining when our love was new, our moments spent together were filled with excitement and bliss. The time we shared went by too quickly , oh how it flew! When you would leave and we were apart, the clock seemed to stand silent and still, your absense always weighed heavy on my heart. Every morning I always watched you leaving, walking out the door. I would say to you-honey please dont go! You would smile, kiss my cheek and say-don't worry baby, I'll be back and I'll love you even more! Over the years, as the time went by, our love grew richer and deeper. It seemed as if we didn't even have to try! Our lives were very full and busy those days, not much time to spend together, but we always found a few moments to show our love in many different ways. And still, every morning I always watched you leaving, walking out the door. I would say to you-honey please dont go! You would smile, kiss my cheek and say- don't worry baby I'll be back and I'll love you even more! God blessed us with a child, she filled our life with joy! She was daddy's little girl, her little smiles drove you wild! Our times alone together grew shorter yet, but we managed to steal a moment or two to remember how sweet our love felt when first we met. And still, every morning, baby in my arms. I always watched you leaving, walking out the door. I would say to you-honey please dont go! You would smile, kiss our cheeks and say-don't worry baby I'll be back and I'll love you even more! Another year had came and went, our lives enriched by another heavenly gift, a baby son we were sent! We were very happy and felt complete. I was busy washing bottles and wiping tiny faces, you were working long hours trying to make ends meet. An evening spent alone together would be such a treat, but we never seemed to see each other any more, time alone seemed like an impossible feat! And still, every morning, baby in my arms. I always watched you leaving, walking out the door. I would say to you-honey please dont go! You would smile, kiss our cheeks and say-don't worry baby I'll be back and I'll love you even more! The kids are grown now and leaving , what a wonderful life we've had! Where has all the time gone?, it went by much to fast! Now I am sitting here all alone, grieving, dreaming of our past, wishing God had not taken you from me, and I had just one more chance to see you leaving, walking out the door. one last chance to say to you-honey please dont go! one last time to see you smile, feel your kiss upon my cheek and hear you say-don't worry baby I'll be back and I'll love you even more! Sandra |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh, just beautiful Sans ~ Soft and tender memories of a beautiful love, tears came as I read this touching piece of your heart. Thanks for sharing and welcome!!! Bonnie |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Sandra, this is very beautiful and touching. I won't go into a critique, since I'm not getting notification that you want one from your profile.  Welcome (again) to Passions in Poetry! Check your email for a special message.  Alicat “It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most intelligent, but the one most responsive to change.” Charles Darwin |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sandra - nice to see you made it over to Open... this is indeed a touching piece.. Again, welcome to our family hon...  K...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I enjoyed your poem! Lovely write!   WELCOME TO PASSIONS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very touching poem, Sandra! Welcome to Passions!! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing! Hugs. |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Amzingly written Absolutely loved it Welcome to Passions - hope to read more from you. CD |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful......brought tears to my eyes. Rich deep love.......Welcome! Will look forward to seeing more of your work! "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
Simply beautiful Sandra!!! Such a lovely tribute to a lifetime of love.He is still at your side my dear friend, and helping you from God's side. Brian |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our humble home!! Sit back, pull up a quill and have a good time! Let me know if you ever need anything or have questions. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed, Sandra I enjoyed reading this very much - Welcome to our corner of the cybersphere... This is a wonderful place (that's pretty addictive).. I hope you didn't plan on accomplishing any of your own work from now on... Again - Welcome to Passions - We're happy to have you here...  |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
Thank you all so very much for your kind words! And Nan...you are so right about this becoming addictive. This was my first stop of the day with my first cup of coffee lol. OHHH I do want to mention that this poem was not written about myself...my wonderful husband is still very much alive! The inspiration for the poem was my mother and father. My father passed away 19 years ago. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was eagerly awaiting your poems after reading your gracious responses... and my anticipation found no disappointment at all in this lovely poem. *S* This is great... I look forward to more! Welcome to Passions! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WELCOME!! This is very nice...... SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautifully poignant. I would especially like to echo dreamkeeper. Welcome! Those left behind always want just one more smile, one more touch, one more... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
welcome to passions. beautiful entrance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sandra---What a beautiful tribute to the love of your mother and father...welcome to passions! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sandra this is tear jerking! Very touching and tender piece! I'm glad you decided to join us. This made a great entrance. Hope we'll be seeing more |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome my friend. . . we're glad to have you here!!!! This is excellent. . . filled with love. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching, Sandra. Welcome, again, to Passions! It's great, isn't it?! |
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