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Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-03-06 01:46 AM


*i know you guys have all heard the song--
right??...well here's my version/twist LOL*

yes that's right carolina girls are the best
we have it all...sweetness and charm
know how to cook, our mamas taught us that
keep our children safe from harm

deep down in the south
where the sunshine pours down
just a moment in this atmosphere
and a smile will replace your frown

carolina girls are sassy
but we know just what to say
when you feel alone or tired
we're there to brighten your day

some say it's southern hospitality
hmmm now there's a thought or two
i have the highest pride in my home state
nothing like a carolina sky, carolina blue

carolina girls can shag
yes beach music is the best
gotta say it again Y'ALL
carolina girls ace the test

*i know corny, but im in one of my silly
moods tonight LOL* thanks for bearing w/
me


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 03-07-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-03-06 08:59 AM


Amy, I think this is really cute..... SEA
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2001-03-07 05:55 AM


"we have it all...sweetness and charm" ....hmm indeed you do dear

I really enjoyed this hon

Maree


I may know the word, but not say it
I may know the truth, but not face it
I may hear a sound, a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head, indifferent.

Natalie Merchant


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-07-2001).]

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
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3 posted 2001-03-11 04:23 PM


Amy:

I like this poem. It was light and cute. It is true though, us Carolina girls are wonderful. So are the guys lol. Can't get too much of a good thing.Being Silly is good sometimes.

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-03-11 04:31 PM


A wonderful dedication....I'm originally from Charleston, South Carolina and I believe every word that you say....yes, Carolina girls is all that.....peace!

Nathan

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