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Brian Beaudry
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since 2001-03-03
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Northern Ontario Canada

0 posted 2001-03-05 09:13 PM



With You, Missing You

Your touch I miss the most of all
gentle, calming nerves enthrall
now when I try to pull you near
whisper I love you in your ear
my arms draw air, empty embrace
as molten tears sear down my face
gentle words I speak to you
of joy in finding love so true
you cannot hear my longing plea
can't find the voice to answer me
I watch you sobbing in your sleep
again the tears begin to seep
and try to comfort your despair
your tortured soul I would repair
but nothing that I try will halt
the sadness that your heart assaults
it breaks me heart to see you hurt
I wish to past times we could revert
where hand in hand we met the world
in joy and love our days unfurled
but those days have come to end
in time your broken heart will mend
so I sit helpless, wailful of your pain
convulsing in sorrow,crying in vain
I wish to hold you, comfort your fear
push back your hair, kiss dry the tear
but I can't help you, stay your cry
who was to know that I would die

Brian Beaudry

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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-03-05 09:38 PM


Brian, this brought chills, what an ending. And a beautifully written, powerful poem.
Sandra

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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-03-05 09:48 PM


Oh, echoes of Ghost...how chillingly beautiful...
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missouri
3 posted 2001-03-05 10:06 PM


Brian...this just sent shivers...
Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-03-05 11:11 PM


Wow, never saw it coming, Brian! I love that!! Great work! Definately "Ghost-ish" as Sunshine said. My first thought was Sixth Sense. Awesome.
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