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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-03-05 01:56 PM

Some One Day

someday
I shall write well
and in writing tell
how I shall sit a spell
there, in your heart,
someday

wherever else
should I be?

for I have no other’s
heart, where we are we

and you ask that I never
part from your reality

that in my smile
you shall forever be

using my eyes as
a mirror of time

in that I am yours,
as you are mine

O come, love, come
through forever run

where our us might
play beneath the sun

where we might savor
our being undone

some one day,
I shall write quite well
and in writing quietly tell
how I shall sit here a spell
living in your heart,
someday

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Kerri S
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 61
Rhode Island

1 posted 2001-03-05 02:35 PM

So very beautiful. Sounds like a love potion to me.

Kerri

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-03-05 03:01 PM

Karilea.....
Someday, is right now, and believe me...you do write much more than 'quite well', and I hope that you forever continue!!!!! I loved this one....

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-03-05 03:14 PM

Some one day has come,my friend. What a wonderful write.
Sandra

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-03-05 03:24 PM

beautiful, just beautiful and I agree with sunnyone....someday is right now, as knowing that you always write quite well

Excellent my friend as always
((hugs))
Charisma

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-03-05 03:38 PM

and you ask that I never
part from your reality

love these thoughts......*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-03-05 04:05 PM

You already write quite well and some one day you'll be sitting in that heart, if you're not already.

I really like this...

"using my eyes
as a mirror of time

in that I am yours
as you are mine."

Very very nicely done dear poet lady!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-03-05 04:09 PM

mezmerizing.....beautiful, definately magic here........

SEA

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2001-03-05 05:11 PM

Kari dear heart not only do you write quite well, you write brilliantly, like angels kisses, your words arise from the page to enchant the soul. That's probably a mixed metaphor, well whatever it is, it's a great discription of your writing. Absolutely first class love as always

And yes it's a keeper and I love it
Take care love as always
Puck

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

9 posted 2001-03-05 05:20 PM

It sings like a beautiful love song.

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