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Celeste
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0 posted 2001-03-04 08:22 PM


It's quiet
and I can cuddle up and contemplate
this windowpane I've stared out so long
and the candle flame that still dances delicately
beside me

Only I can't see tomorrow
in that gentle light
just the tangled web I wove of yesterday
so completely badly
again and again

Stepping back inside to watch quietly
the world out there
that I'm just not ready for
and knowing that it's okay
if it's by choice

This armchair is an old friend
The blanket soft and comforting
and the candle flame a reminder
that here is where I should be


*An appology to all for my emotional yesterday. Leaving the forum was a bad decision. I thank those of you who were so kind and caring.


"Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm."

~Winston Churchill~

© Copyright 2001 Celeste - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-03-04 08:41 PM


I am having the same thoughts today only mine are not quite as quiet...I am glad you chose not to leave, but I knew you wouldn't... at least not yet

huggzzzz

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-03-04 08:53 PM


It is amazing what happens in less than 24 hours...know that I saw your post elsewhere about leaving, but somehow, knew you would be back....for you are...a dreamkeeper....
Moon Dust
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3 posted 2001-03-04 08:58 PM


Glad to here your not going to leave, nice work too

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Celeste
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4 posted 2001-03-04 09:06 PM


*sniff sniff* Thanks guys!

"Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm."

~Winston Churchill~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2001-03-04 09:30 PM


dreamkeeper - I for one am very pleased that you are staying. You write so well, and your words wish to be shared. Thank you for staying, so that I can share those words.

BC

Dennis
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since 2001-02-19
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Indiana
6 posted 2001-03-04 09:54 PM


Sure, stick around, I'm having the time of my life here!

Keep writing.

Sven
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7 posted 2001-03-04 10:35 PM


dreamkeeper. . . I too am glad that you're not leaving. . .

thank you for this. . . it's wonderful. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
8 posted 2001-03-04 11:11 PM


Don't you love those moments when the armchair and the comforter feel just like what they are supposed to...a balm, not just a port in the storm, not just a place to hide, but a place to heal and survive. A place to become strong again.
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
9 posted 2001-03-04 11:23 PM


kelli--

beautiful poem! im so glad you aren't
leaving...i was really sad when i read
that yesterday. i love reading your
writing! and yes i feel the same way
about you. you are becoming a cherished
friend thru writing too! take care

amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
10 posted 2001-03-05 09:56 AM


Welcome back and a wonderful poem you've written here!

Nathan

DreamLess
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since 2001-02-28
Posts 92

11 posted 2001-03-05 10:44 AM


really wonderful..

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

Red-uni
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since 2000-07-30
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Georgia, USA
12 posted 2001-03-05 10:47 AM


Nice. Enjoyed this one, I know about the arm chair and candles.
Red

Celeste
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Posts 597

13 posted 2001-03-05 05:13 PM


Thank you all so much for your kind comments and understanding.

"Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm."

~Winston Churchill~

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