Open Poetry #12 |
Secrets of the Heart |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Secrets of the heart Threaded in the golden warps of time Are those events embedded in the mind And there they shall remain, untouched, unseen Yarns below the weft of velveteen You, who lived the moment now disguised Still hidden in your heart from curious eye Are solely knowing of the fine detail For just the weaver can unweave the tale Those moments through your eyes have golden hues That glow inside the deepest part of you It is a glorious splendor you embrace That sometimes shines a radiance on your face What happiness is sacred in your keep From chambers of your heart will never seep The greatest moment of your greatest day No soul on earth can ever take away Buried in your past are treasures dear Unseen, untouched, unheard by any ear Elizabeth Santos |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ohhhh my Liz ~ Such a tender, beautiful, loving read to start this day. Bonnie |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
really wonderful work .. WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What a splendid weave...well done, Lady... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz---The song of deepest heart shine upon a face ...so beautiful and true. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautiful this fabulous write, just beautiful with words that moved my heart deeply. excellent as always Liz. (hugs)) Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Buried in your past are treasures dear Unseen, untouched, unheard by any ear yes, unspoken words..*s I felt like this today.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think everyone has those precious secrets. Wonderful memories that no one can take away from them....a past where the soul keeps a library of times for calming the heart.....this is an absolutely wonderful poem Elizabeth!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yup. *S* And those treasures sustain us, give us strength... and sneak smiles onto our face when they're most needed. *S* I like this one very much, Elizabeth! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, Simply beautiful and so full of truth, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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