Open Poetry #12 |
One Woman One Man |
maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
One Woman One Man By Richard Maxfield 1-14-2001 Place yesterday in the past All those days have gone on by Every wrong suffered then I will kiss until they fade Tomorrow is yet to come But I promise the sun will rise I shall always be there for you Forever at your side As I take your hand I place it on my heart Pledging my undying love Eternity and beyond For this is our wondrous day The day for which we were made Together we walk hand and hand One woman one man |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Max, This is gorgeous! Truly what love is all about. Elise |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww Rich, me sweet friend... How sweet this is... One woman, One man.. What else do we need? Loved this, me did...Hugs ...~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
what a novel concept! LOL enjoyed the read |
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krysalis Junior Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 22 |
Ahhh... my romanitc friend.. you never cease to amaze me with the beauty of your words!!!!! |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Sir Richard, "Every wrong suffered then I will kiss until they fade" So precious are thy thoughts as in my mind invade the wants, desires, said by ye a wondrous pen you hold Today, tomorrow, forevermore shall thy words within be told. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you my dear friends for taking the time to read and post your wonderful comments. Love and light, Richard |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard love, this truly is an absolutely beautiful piece One Man, One Woman, One Dream? uttely wonderful write. Absolutely fabulous Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Richard... What a perfect pledge of love.....to be spoken as wedding vows, perhaps? Wonderful!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you my friends for your comments. Love and light, Richard |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is such a beautiful pledege of love max....I like the second stanza the best...thanks for sharing this fabulous write! Nathan |
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