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my universe |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
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my universe lifetimes are like stars forever reaching into the darkness from a mysterious cosmic womb; forever searching the void for an end to its seemingly eternal emptiness; forever exploring the uncertainty for a place to rest. lifetimes are like stars, yet mine is but a moon and knowing my desire I orbit only you. your embrace is my gravity; your heart is my sunshine; your love is my universe. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your embrace is my gravity; your heart is my sunshine; your love is my universe. " I really enjoyed this....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful thoughts penned...I like this very much. Poeminister |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mike....mmm this is so sweet...I especially like...and knowing my desire I orbit only you...perfect line...would love to hear that whispered in my ear |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Greeneyes....Glad you enjoyed it...Thanx! Poeminister...ditto! Paula....perfect line??? I could've used it 20 or 30 years ago.(LOL) Glad you liked the poem. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful...I loved the comparisons you used too...brilliant write! Nathan |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Very good poem. Who ever it was written for is a lucky person hopefully they know that. Kerri |
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