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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
The memory holds many mysteries, So much concealed untold and unknown. Engulfed in feelings not conceived, Stifling in despondency, adhering to the fiber of life. Plead for it to go away, it stays, as small amounts break through. You know well my plight, Most do not comprehend. They are oblivious to what’s occurring, as I am engulfed in a sea of perplexity. As your poem wrote so well, touched the very core of me. Thankful, that someone else knows. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
red- really enjoyed this. some really cool lines you got here! great read. take care amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Thanks, Amy |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Red-uni, Yes I have found that when some write it touches me like no other can speaking my thoughts so clearly, this I really liked thank you, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The idea of author perspective capturing reader perspective is so alive in poetry and makes the wheels of poetic expression turn...this is a great tribute to the feelings contained within and enhanced by expression...very well done!!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Red, Hold tight to that one who knows more than anyone else ever will what goes on in your life. I enjoyed this, my Friend. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You have a uniqueness to your writing that I so envy! It shines!!!!!! I just love it!"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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