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Red-uni
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since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

0 posted 2001-03-04 11:08 PM

The memory holds many mysteries,
So much concealed untold and unknown.
Engulfed in feelings not conceived,
Stifling in despondency,
adhering to the fiber of life.
Plead for it to go away,
it stays, as small amounts break through.
You know well my plight,
Most do not comprehend.
They are oblivious to what’s occurring,
as I am engulfed in a sea of perplexity.
As your poem wrote so well,
touched the very core of me.
Thankful, that someone else knows.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2001-03-04 11:52 PM

red-

really enjoyed this. some really
cool lines you got here! great read.
take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

2 posted 2001-03-05 09:18 AM

Thanks, Amy

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2001-03-06 09:09 AM

Hi Red-uni,

Yes I have found that when some write it touches me like no other can speaking my thoughts so clearly, this I really liked thank you,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-03-06 09:13 AM

The idea of author perspective capturing reader perspective is so alive in poetry and makes the wheels of poetic expression turn...this is a great tribute to the feelings contained within and enhanced by expression...very well done!!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-03-06 06:41 PM

Red,
Hold tight to that one who knows more than anyone else ever will what goes on in your life. I enjoyed this, my Friend.

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

6 posted 2001-03-06 07:20 PM

You have a uniqueness to your writing that I so envy! It shines!!!!!!

I just love it!

"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

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