Open Poetry #12 |
Unshed Tears |
Disgruntled Junior Member
since 2001-03-01
Posts 13 |
Unshed tears, They fill my heart to brimming, Every time I see your face, Hear the sweet symphony of your voice, Another drop is added, And now it is filled, Up to the brim, And every day I await, Expecting that final droplet, The one that will send my senses reeling, My emotions splashing across the floor of a love that was not there, Your love. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Disgruntled, Such sadness here. it is never easy to let go, yet we must move on and look forward. Someone very wise once told me tomorrow is a brighter day. I truly believe that. Welcome to Passions. Nice work! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yep some people are harder to let go from, butin time you will. Nice work. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Very bitter indeed. Some of us have experienced this and I for one am glad that this feeling is shared by others Good write CD |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, a hard emotion indeed...but nicely expressed! Good write! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its never easy knowing your love isnt returned....and knowing you have to let go...beautifully told |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Disgruntled, So very sad when love is not returned, but for your poem you did such a wonderful job writing it, your thoughts were conveyed perfectly, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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