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Fishing for Faith..............#3
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Fishing for Faith..............#3 |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Fishing for Faith Underline in red the mistakes I've made, sliding under ropes that were meant to keep me out, pacing my steps to imagined devils pace, listening to the truth of all this silence. Play me a song that covers and stills the noisy breath of my searching heart and opens the sky to the filiment of my questioning pole, to fish for truth in heaven's galaxy. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, thank you for speaking for me....always.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Although I love rhyme, your writing always moves me. *L* Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dear Martie, I can picture you as being just that....... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Martie, Lovely words as always. Take care. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
very thoughtful - yes, even provocative pondering now as write definitely not your usual Martie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You speak for yourself so beautifully, my friend. Sy--I'm always so pleased when you reply to one of my poems...especially if it moved you...thanks. Balladeer--Yes, I believe you can. Gemini--Thank you for the lovely reply. Bill--Thoughtful, for sure, but provacative? I'm glad you found it so...thank you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! That second part just says so much...excellent Martie just excellent! Please sing me that song when you hear it. The one that...... "covers and stills the noisy breath of your searching heart".....the same one that.......opens the sky to the filiment of your questioning pole to fish for truth in heaven's galaxy." Now that's POETRY!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Underline in red the mistakes I've made, sliding under ropes that were meant to keep me out, pacing my steps to imagined devils pace, listening to the truth of all this silence. Play me a song that covers and stills the noisy breath of my searching heart ============================= I ran out of red ink a long time ago... and Im still searching ... I know the words to the song... just trying to find my voice... beautiful, sincere thought provoking write Martie were all looking for the same thing...just in different places  meIt's amazing how you make your face just like a wall how you take your heart and turn it off how I turn my head and lose it all MB20 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed, Martie! Well written! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ All baited up - waiting for a nibble ! Love you, sweet Sis. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
*note* (gone fishing)  Love it Martie! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
dip in the right fishin hole is duh key! real good'en |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautifully you write of the quest... I like this very much, Martie! |
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