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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2001-03-04 07:47 PM


Line 1 ( ___ ) said a bad thing.
Line 2 ( __ ) tackled Line 1 to clip his wings.
Line 3 ( _ ) said something even more inflammatory.
Line 4 ( _____ ), upon hearing such filth, went ambulatory.
Line 5 ( ________ ) had the perfect solution.
Line 6 ( _ _ ___ _ ) was full of confusion.
Line 7 ( ____ ______ ) said that didn’t rhyme.
Line 8 ( _ _ _ _ ______ _ _ _ _ _ ) said the same, wasting more time.
Line 9 ( )))))) was all a mess.
Line 10 ( DF*DFDF ) couldn’t bring herself to confess.
Line 11 ( asd;flkjads8f034545 ) was as angry as the first.
“__ _ ___ _____ ___” is only a sampling of how she cursed.

(Line 12 never got to put his words in;
his message was erased in the two-faced din)

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Voiceless
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1 posted 2001-03-04 07:57 PM


Neat!
I like this alot!
To the library!


~*Peachy Be*~

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2001-03-04 08:33 PM


Heh heh. Danke, Voiceless.

Mike

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3 posted 2001-03-05 04:04 PM


Mike~ now, you know I like this SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

ethome
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4 posted 2001-03-05 04:06 PM


I wouldn't dare even try......I love every bit of it!!
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5 posted 2001-03-05 07:01 PM


Line 12 never got to put his words in;
his message was erased in the two-faced din)
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yer so cute when youre rhyming and being poetically sarcastic (making a point)
I know

It's amazing
how you make your face just like a wall
how you take your heart and turn it off
how I turn my head and lose it all
MB20

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