I hate myself for loving you

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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-04 06:01 PM

You're here, only in body,
not in heart. I wish that
I could be, even one little thought in your mind.
Your eyes, they don't see me,
even though you can see.
Your lips, they don't kiss me,
even though we kiss.
How can I explain this love of mine?
It's subtle,
it's wild,
it walks alone in crowded streets.
And in my nights,
when the lights are out and I cry,
I ask myself,
How can I love you so much,
and hate myself for loving you?

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-03-04 06:25 PM

Could you get just a little more intense here? Ha! Your writing gets better and better...and how is that possible when it started out perfectly. Your style is so different from most and I follow it so effortlessly...as I do your thoughts...in this.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-03-04 06:30 PM

I know what you mean...
I have experienced what you write of..
so i appreciate your writing very much.

~*Peachy Be*~

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

3 posted 2001-03-04 06:33 PM

How do you withold
and yet not there
means many things

I have a heart
but is it my own
can I will I ever know

Places on faces

Your words invoke
more

My compliments

AT

"Truth in this gray-marred, subjective world, may be defined as intent. Truth, then is one thing, the Intent to Conceal Nothing."

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 03-04-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-04 07:25 PM

this is one for many to relate to ....VERY well done! I felt this......

SEA

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-03-04 08:16 PM

How can I love you so much,
and hate myself for loving you?

Very, very powerful lines....

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-04 08:28 PM

walker,

Wonderful writing filled with powerful emotions we can all relate to. Nice work.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

7 posted 2001-03-04 09:16 PM

AMEN!!!!!!!!

"Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm."

~Winston Churchill~

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

8 posted 2001-03-04 10:46 PM

There is a strong truth in what you say and it is difficult to give an answer, but I know this feeling you describe so well.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2001-03-05 01:39 AM

This is very intense...and very well written...full of all the truths we would rather hide...

DreamLess
Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 92

10 posted 2001-03-05 07:30 AM

i find your writing very interesting..
thanx..

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

Taffetta
Junior Member

since 2001-02-26

Posts 27

11 posted 2001-03-05 08:38 AM

Enjoyed your writing even though the truth hurts reading out how I feel. Thank you for sharing.

Taffetta

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